Angus

Angus has written a narrative based on the 3 Little Pigs. Let him know what you think of his first attempt at a narrative.
Angus has been attempting to write rhyming couplets. These have two lines with a rhyming word at the end of each. Ice cream.

When it while it rumbles down my tummy. I lean I scream It is scrunches I am so cold the ice cream went bold. When it falls it splats.

By Angus.

This is a poem Angus wrote where he was focusing on using lots of adjectives (describing words)

ST CLAIR

Crash! BANG! Go the waves at St Clair Beach. WOW! Look at the shiny water The glittery sun Sparkles down. Rocky rocks OHHW! Green swishing Trees WOOOH. It smells like salt I feel lucky

By Angus