Jaimee

Jaimee has written a creative narrative. See what you think.


This was one of Jaimee's first attempts at poetry this year. She was trying to include lots of interesting adjectives.

CHIPMUNKS

I feel the warm breeze coming from the heater, I slide down the slippery slide, I feel ecstatic to be here. The slippery slide bounces me to the end, My mum is calling out to me, Time to go.

By Jaimee Cranstoun

This is a short story Jaimee wrote about Pain

PAIN

On a Saturday and Sunday I played on my skates. But on Sunday I fell off my skates and onto my bum. It felt like I broke my bum. I could still walk and skate but it rrrreeeaaallllyyyy hurt! My dad also had a sore bum he used to get it operated on at the hospital. When I fell I screamed in pain sooooo loud. I could hardly get up and down!