Jasiah has written his first narrative story. See what you think...


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Jasiah has been learning about different forms of poetry. Check out his Haiku called "The Airforce". A haiku has 3 lines; 5 syllables in the first line, 7 syllables in the second, and 5 syllables in the third.

The Airforce

The Airforce is cool
Air force has rocket launchers
It is so deadly

By Jasiah


Jasiah has also been trying to add some adjectives and onomatopoeia to his writing. Onomatopoeia are words that say their own name, like Pop! and Bang!

SKATEBOARDING

Whoosh!
I’m going down at high speed
Huge ollies
Good kick flips
Humungous horseshoe
Long bowls
Awesome 360

By Jasiah